Absolutely utterly freakin great
Fantastic work, just completely fantastic.
It is easier to say what's "bad" about this movie, than what's good, cos there are so many good things...
So lemme say, I think the simulated film scratches were very nice, but a little overdone, which made them slightly distracting. I know alpha effects take up space and processing speed, but maybe the scratches would be less noticable if they were grey instead of black? Just my opinion -- and the only thing I can think of, that is bad.
This movie is excellent, I really liked it. The music is fantastic also -- it is used on another animation here on Newgrounds, "A field guide to tripping" or something like that -- I forget. Great music.
There was a scene change early in this movie, that I liked a lot... When the main character is writing up his plans, while at the desk, you start out from his perspective, or an over-shoulder perspective, and then you switch to a perspective in front of the desk, looking back at him, with the window and the outside in the background... Making Flash movies is hard on many accounts, but some of the stuff that I struggle with, are perspectives and continuity. That switch of perspective was really good. Being able to think of a seemingly simple thing like that does not come easy. I think I learned something from it.
Great work!